A certified "Shut up, Caliburn" moment just when fun beach times are happening. You're giving her more internal conflict. Thanks a lot, Caliburn.
Thank you for reading!
PAGE ONE
Panel One
Ida stands happily on the shore of the beach by the water as the sun sets.
Panel Two
Ida runs forward to the water, followed by Aiden and Dawn.
Panel Three
Ren stares out as her friends approach the water. She turns to see a maroon cloud forming to her side- Caliburn.
CALIBURN: Feel it. Don't let go.
Panel Four
Ren turns away from Caliburn nervously as it hangs above her shoulder.
CALIBURN: Your anger. Your desperation to be seen. To win.
Panel Five
Ida and Dawn happily jump into the water as Aiden sits with an umbrella along the beach.
Panel Six
Ida smiles brightly.